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Post by adderstar on Apr 27, 2011 8:37:08 GMT -5
Name: Adderstar
Gender: Tom
Age: Forty-two moons
Rank: Leader
Clan: WindClan
Mate/crush: Open
Role player: Foxglove
Personality:
THE GOOD
- Confident about anything he does. Except hunting and dealing with high strung queens. Especially confident about training and fighting
- Courageous about fighting and speaking to others about manners of the forest and clan. This show most in battle. In past, Adderstar’s courage turned into recklessness, but the leader has overcome that problem.
- Decisive about anything. He rather not dwell too much on a problem because it weighs too much on the mind and gets into the way of other matters.
- Devoted about forest and clan. Any problems his clan faces is, of course, his problem. They have been even when he was a young warrior and not every aspect of WindClan did not concern him. Though he may not be the most social cat, he is clearly devoted to his clan.
- Honest about anything. This can be a problem, but when he approaches another, he is very blunt and honest, giving what he thinks will happen in a situation to anyone who asks.
- Mature about struggles and problems. When dealing with an unhappy queen or border encounter, he tries to stay calm and mature, even when there is a whining apprentice or bristling opponent. There are times when Adderstar forgets he is a leader and acts quite immature. He tries to keep these slips few and far between.
- Positive about the future. When he was an older apprentice, he promised that he would never worry about the past or the present or the future. Even with the crisis of the assassins, he stays positive, one of the factors being his faith in StarClan
THE BAD
- Aloof about subjects he rather not touch. Even to some of the clan members, he does converse for a long amount of time. He still cares about each member of WindClan, but he cannot express it properly.
- Arrogant about anything. The decisions he makes, the way he speaks. This is when his confidence gets too high.
- Impolite about too many things. Adderstar does not think of others when he speaks and sometimes he says the wrong things. He can apologize later, in private, but this should never be expected.
- Impractical about some decisions he makes. They are sometimes made on a whim, but he does listen to the feedback from the others in his clan, especially his deputy.
- Suspicious about many non WindClan individuals, especially those who do not belong in a clan. He has enough faith in the clans to trust except when it comes to other high ranking cats.
- Strict about how mentors handle training and how the warrior code is presented. He has his limits, but he can lose himself in how he approaches others.
Appearance: - Lean build, long body, smaller than most
- Short brown tabby fur absent of any white; darker on top than belly
- Large ears; Expressive green eyes; pointed gray muzzle; thin tail with black tip, half the size of his own body
History:
KIT
Feathertail has two kits--Adderkit and Stonekit, fathered by Redfur
The kits were raised normally, except their parents strongly encouraged Adderkit to aspire for medicine cat's apprentice even though the parents knew there was no way to sway the medicine cat.
APPRENTICE
Adderpaw was named an apprentice and mentored by Ivyfoot, a warrior, this was a disappointment to Adderpaw’s parents though Stonepaw was named medicine cat’s apprentice.
Ivyfoot was a new mentor who could not handle Adderpaw’s adventurous side, so another the deputy at the time Finstrike helped. Adderpaw admired and hated Finstrike. He made training sessions hard and rigid, but he was very masterful at fighting, loving to show Adderpaw how to fight. Sadly, the fighting led Finstrike to his death in battle.
Nevertheless, Adderpaw trained hard, practicing his fighting skills with the other apprentices. He was even responsible for making sure Stonepaw was skilled in fighting. She liked it so much that she could no longer act as a medicine cat’s apprentice.
WARRIOR
Despite becoming enemies with the medicine cat (after a while, Adderpaw could not take the complaining about his injuries), he became a warrior, taking the name Adderstrike. It was a heartfelt name as it reminded him of Finstrike.
After becoming a warrior, he wanted to become deputy. It was his only aspiration. He begged for an apprentice, bugged the current deputy about attending patrols, and hunted every day. The leader noticed his endeavors and his intentions. He told Adderstrike that this was not the way.
He still continued to work, but after a while, he forgot what his goal was and just did the work.
At twenty moons, he received his first apprentice. She was a shy she-cat named Rainpaw. She was an easy apprentice, listening to his every word as he taught the importance of borders and warrior code. Then, thanks to the other apprentices, she opened up and talked. It tried Adderstrike’s patience, but Rainpaw soon gained the name Rainfoot.
Six moons passed and he was given another apprentice. This one was more rambunctious, a picture of him as a kit, but he was a good hunter, so Adderstrike taught him everything he knew about hunting, even asking his aging mother (whom he was not on the best terms with) for help. While relating everything to hunting, this apprentice Berrypaw became Berrypelt. Soon after Berrypelt's warrior ceremony, Adderstrike's mother Feathertail passed away due to sickness. The warrior was not sure how to react as his mother and he never were close.
DEPUTY
The past deputy passed away. At thirty moons, Adderstrike remembered his aspirations, but then remembered the aging leader’s words, so he ignored the position and carried on with his day. Before the next day, he was named deputy.
Surprised, he did everything to keep the peace. As a deputy, he missed teaching the apprentices as he had less, but he loved the fighting. Whenever there was a patrol, his spitfire led him to defend the borders.
When an apprentice got hurt in one of these border fights, Adderstrike realized he had to calm down. Every cat did not love fighting as much as he did, so he took it to himself to train with other friends and fight warriors who wanted to learn a few tricks.
LEADER
Then the assassin's struck, robbing the past leader of three lives. No one had prepared for the death especially Adderstrike who assumed he would have to retire from the position due to the amount of time the leader would have lived. It was a bittersweet ceremony especially when the leader gave him his final life.
Furious, he feels a bit bitter being leader and is determined for find these murders. Adderstar previously assumed the reported deaths of the other warriors and deputy were acts of violence, but he understands that a dark cloud is at the forest floor. Of course, he suspects the rest of the Clans realize this threat and if not, they soon will.
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Post by leaf on Apr 27, 2011 14:34:33 GMT -5
Hello! I know you're not finished with your bio yet, but I just want to point some things out. First, please change your account name to the name of your character! =) Or, for this, the name of your desired character, xD. Secondly, if you have read our plot, assassins have attacked the Clans! These assassins have killed WindClan's leader. No old age or greencough involved xDD Please include a little note of how he plans to deal with the assassins at the end of your history (: Thanks and the history looks very nice apart from that little thing!
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Post by adderstar on Apr 27, 2011 15:12:41 GMT -5
I am very sorry. The history was not definite because I was going to check past people plot and review the main plot (because my short term memory is terrible) before posting it, but I forgot to.Thank you for reminding me to do so. And I will do it now. Again, very sorry.
Also, does the past leader have any given name? Just so I can get rid of these "the leader"
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Post by leaf on Apr 27, 2011 17:28:19 GMT -5
It's fine, no big deal (: Your bio looks good - it's accepted! However, this time it's okay, but I'd like to ask if, next time, you could put your appearance and personality in paragraph form instead of bulleted points? This time, it's okay though. Great job, and congratulations...Adderstar is now the leader of WindClan!
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